Sunday, May 24, 2009

Clock

Tick tock.
Tick tock.
Tick tock.
Tick tock.
Tick
Tick tock.

1 comment:

Barbara Lorraine said...

Here more than anywhere else I'd like to you play with formatting. You're a storyteller Orvis, and one of the ways to tell a story is through the experience of time on the page. All the lines kept together, because of the quick sound of the "tick tock," read quickly. If you spaced them out, some closer, some farther, or all uniformly far, anything you want--you could actually have an intriguing inferred narrative. Play with it.