It's about people writing, and who cares about the what, as long as we keep at it.
Thursday, September 3, 2009
The anticipation of seeing fire, spinning luxuriously on the end of a string, appearing to not be attached to anything, to be surrounded by these people, sets me to wishing it was already after dark.
I wish li8ke mad that I could know what it was you are specifically describing! It sounds very beautiful. I love your use of rhyme, very subtle. Doesn't come on too strong, which is great. I do think you can simplify by removing the notion of "appearing not to be" and just describing the image of unattachedness. It's magical!
Visual art and audio are not acceptable unless you are able to provide textual references. So, your post can include a picture or sculpture or audial selection that you are writing about or somehow tying in to your written work. However, these things alone will not suffice. There must be text involved, even if it's only a single line. This blog isn't about creation alone. It's about the written word.
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I wish li8ke mad that I could know what it was you are specifically describing! It sounds very beautiful. I love your use of rhyme, very subtle. Doesn't come on too strong, which is great. I do think you can simplify by removing the notion of "appearing not to be" and just describing the image of unattachedness. It's magical!
I love your contributions, Fran. Keep coming!
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