Sunday, September 6, 2009

My sentence

"So wait, he broke your arm and claimed he was provoked, and now you're getting suspended?"


Barbara Lorraine said...

Oh Geoff! This sounds almost painfully roman a clef! I hope not. ;-)

Some sentences are complete stories in and of themselves, and other,s like yours, are fantastic tidbits of longer stories. Maybe only a few lines longer, maybe a few pages, but it can go any way you want it to. I certainly hope you'll return to the larger story behind this fragment in the future. Awaiting it with antici


Geoff said...

Thank you for the encouragement! I shall endeavor to continue.

And yes, you are onto something, though I'm happy to say the truth's ever so slightly less dramatic.